PEER EDIT.

For Tram:
You should talked about all the conflicts Ender with though. Also the problems he had with his family. And when he found out the truth about everything. Add more detail more to Ender. I think you should talk about the people around him and how they have effect his life and what is he doing. Expand on what type of person Ender is like how he is always the person that is trying to pleased people or who everyone is relying on.  I agree with you at the end that Ender have changed and he lost apart of him but he is still cared about people and tried to do what he can for the people he hurt.

For Kaila:
Your book seems really interesting. The writing style seems complicated. You should describe more about it and give me more detail. Also reflect more on the author and his decisions on why he choose to write the book the way he did. In addition, for the character you should try to link the author writing style and the character together. You should expand on what the book is about and how the character reflects around other people. Also I think your usage of why you don't like the book can be more descriptive. But GOOD ESSAY!